Excerpt of A Good Man by Vanessa Morgan

The lovely Vanessa Morgan contacted me about a month ago in regards to her new screenplay, A Good Man and today I'm happy to share an excerpt of it with you!  Enjoy!!!

Synopsis:

Liked Dexter and American Psycho? Then you will love A Good Man.

Louis Caron is a good man – vegetarian, he feeds the homeless, takes care of animals and is concerned with the ecological future of the planet. But his altruism has a sinister edge – he's a vampire - and local detective Taglioni is becoming increasingly suspicious. Louis' attempt to escape the police will take him on a journey into his own private hell where he is not only forced to confront his worst fears, but also to destroy the lives of those he cares about most.

Excerpt:

EXT – STREET – DAY

Snow-covered streets seen through a floor-to-ceiling
window.

FRED (V.O.)
Would you like to begin, Eric? Your case is
rather peculiar.

ERIC (V.O.)
My name is Eric. I've been a vampire since
1973 and I have constant headaches because
of a brain tumor. An eternal headache, if
you get what I mean. I'm also suffering
from depression, but that's curable, they
say – even for a vampire.

INT. PSYCHOLOGIST'S OFFICE - DAY

LOUIS CARON (55 years old) stares out the window,
lost in thought. Behind him, four people participate
in their weekly group therapy session. Amongst them:
a French lady with crutches (MADAME RENAUD, 50's), a
depressive cancer patient (ERIC, 40's) and a black
obese woman with an exuberant personality
(LÉOPOLDINE, 40's). The moderator, FRED (35), has a
gentle voice. Your typical spiritual guru.

MADAME RENAUD
(with a French accent)
That's nothing compared to me. I have a
broken hip, too much cholesterol, chronic
sinusitus --

LÉOPOLDINE
(provocatively)
I was wondering, Madame Renaud... Were you
already a hypochondriac when you were
transformed or did that come later?

MADAME RENAUD
(too busy with herself to hear the
remark)
… Lupus, malaria, lack of vitamine C,
Addison's disease, …

ERIC
What's bizarre is that every time she comes
here, the list gets longer.

FRED
Let's listen to what Louis has to say.
(to Louis)
Do you want to come and join us, Louis?

Louis turns. He was obviously not following the
conversation.

LOUIS
Uhm? What?
(notices that the session has begun)
Oh, hi Fred. I didn't hear you come in.

Louis sits down.

FRED
Go ahead.

Madame Renaud is still enumerating her ailments.

FRED
Madame Renaud!

She stops speaking. Fred gestures that it is Louis'
turn.

LOUIS
My name is Louis. Louis Caron. I've been a
vampire since 1750 and as you can see, I'm
old and ugly. For me, that's the problem
about being a vampire. I was 55 when I was
transformed and I will stay 55 forever. I
will have wrinkles forever. I will have
arthritis forever. Fucking annoying.

FRED
That's your karma taking revenge on your
body. The more good you do around you, the
more you will be able to lead a happy,
healthy life. But because you are all
vampires, your karma is punishing you. It's
as simple as that. Now, what I'd like to
hear from you is what you all do to improve
your karma. What do you do to be a good
person, despite your vampire nature?

Author Bio:

Screenwriter and novelist Vanessa Morgan is known as the 'female version of Stephen King'. Yo

u can find out more about Vanessa Morgan and her work by going to her personal blog. If you like cats, you might also like the web comic about her cat Avalon.